Gentee,texto revisado. Entrei c a proposta d Luandinha,mudei o q Josi falou e mais outras dicas q recebi =] Thx a lot. Será q ainda falta melhorar??
Hello, future host family!
My name is Alyne. I’m years old.
I live in Bahia-Brasil with my mother.
I have 2 brothers and 2 sisters, but they don’t live with us anymore. Despite this, every weekend they visit us and It’s so nice because we can go to our greatgrandma’s house together.I really like to see my whole family together because it is so much fun.
The Aupair Program is perfect to me because I’m very adaptable, humorous, sociable and I really enjoy to be around kids and work with them you can see that through my work experience. Besides, I’m am an undergraduate in a Portuguese and English Language course so i need to improve my English.
I have so many experiences with children.
I’ve taken care of my yougest sister and some other children in the neighborhood
I’m a volunteer in my University Daycare and toyroom.
I've worked in a school teaching kids
I’ve also worked at IberoStar Resort in Praia do Forte with lots of children including foreign ones
and I could get to know a bit about different cultures of some places.
I’ve taken care of my yougest sister and some other children in the neighborhood
I’m a volunteer in my University Daycare and toyroom.
I've worked in a school teaching kids
I’ve also worked at IberoStar Resort in Praia do Forte with lots of children including foreign ones
and I could get to know a bit about different cultures of some places.
I think I would be a perfect macth for you because I can be like a big sister to your kids and I will do my best to be in harmony at your home. I’m a very respectable person and orginized. I’ll do my best to do everything well.
Thank you for watching my video. I look farward to meeting you =]
curti mt, só acho que a última frase vc podia dizer em vez de "hope to see you soon" "look forward to meeting you!" ;) só uma sugestão!!
ResponderExcluirbjs
então flor, n é que eu volte mais cedo. a data ainda será a que eu escolhi. o negócio é que meu ano acaba oficialmente dia 7 de junho, só que a agência tem os dias certos das au pairs chegarem, n tem disponibilidade toda semana como eu pensava! achei que ela ia chegar na semana q meu ano acabasse mas n tem como. só podia fim de maio ou meio de junho. como pretendo usar parte do "grace period" (o mês extra no país) pra viajar, meio de junho ficaria ruim pra mim, já que escolhi minha volta pro fim de junho e mal teria tempo pra minha viagem. aí ela vem no fim de maio, fico 1 semana com ela e no comecinho de junho já to livre. entendeu? é confuso mesmo rsrs
ResponderExcluirbjs
Thicy.... NOSSA VC ME EMOCIONOU com seu comentário no meu blog... Obrigada de verdade pelo carinho!!!
ResponderExcluirBjs
Ticy td bem, desculpe eu ter sumido, mas aqui o negocio eh corrido menina!
ResponderExcluirSobre seu post eu nao gostei mto dessa parte "I think I would be a perfect aupair to you"...
Eu trocaria por outra coisa, pq Eu acho demostra q vc nao tem certeza e Perfeita au pair nao soa nada humilde uahuahau....soh isso, o resto estah otimo! Agora eh soh produzir! Beijos